Al Desetta, Developmental Editor
I'll Help You Transform a First Draft into a Great Book
Have you written a partial or complete manuscript? Are you stuck in some way and not sure what the answer is? As an award-winning developmental editor, I help authors like you transform a good first draft into a great and published book.
I'm Al Desetta, a full-time developmental editor. I work with authors who have a complete or partial manuscript that needs improvement. I will help you rethink, reorganize, and rewrite your book. As a long-time New York editor I’ve worked with dozens of memoir writers, academics, business leaders, and even first-time authors.
I've edited books for top publishers—Simon & Schuster, Routledge, Cambridge University Press, Corwin Press, Persea Books, North Atlantic Books, Free Spirit Publishing, Youth Communication, and others. My work has received numerous awards and praise from distinguished authors, including Jonathan Kozol, Marian Wright Edelman, Martin Seligman, and Peter Benson.
Based on my wide experience as a professional developmental editor, I know how to go to the heart of your story to enhance your core themes while helping you stay true to your voice and ideas.
A developmental edit may mean a revised organization, rewriting existing material, or developing new material to improve on what you already have. I will guide you through this process. The end result will be a vastly improved book.
Praise for Al Desetta
"The Heart Knows Something Different is a well-written account of the challenges facing youth in the foster care system. It touched the hearts of all who read it."
HILLARY RODHAM CLINTON
Former Secretary of State
“Readers will feel the shock of recognition that accompanies the first discovery of literary brilliance coming from a social context in which most of us…would not ordinarily expect to find it…[L]onging, terror, honesty, and eloquence combine to seize the reader’s heart and mind.”
Author, Savage Inequalities and Amazing Grace
"When the rough manuscript of my memoir went to Mr. Desetta, he reorganized it in a way that was breathtaking. I can't say enough about Al’s talent, work ethic, and ability to make a manuscript shine."
Author, Paradise Costs: A Victim’s Daughter Fights Back Against Elder Abuse
“Al was a great asset in the development of my memoir. His impressive skills turned it into a compelling story.”
Author, Arrows from the Grave: A Memoir of Disinheritance
First, I talk with you about your goals as an author. Second, I carefully evaluate what you've written so far. And third, I offer constructive feedback in the form of a tangible blueprint for improving your manuscript. As you do the writing, I will guide you in executing that blueprint.
Perhaps you aren’t confident about how your story is structured, whether you've gone to the heart of what you really want to say, or whether you’ve written too much or too little about certain events. Perhaps you haven't fully developed the book's major thematic question, the central idea you want to express.
In helping you revise your book, I will pay close attention to core principles that are essential to any book, no matter the genre.
Whatever stage you're at, I will provide a detailed evaluation of your manuscript that identifies its strengths and weaknesses. We'll then have a blueprint going forward for the developmental editing process.
How a Good Book
Becomes a Great One
Greatness starts with asking great questions.
For instance, how can we create a more compelling story line? How can we best organize the material? How can we improve the writing? Are the ideas and themes conveyed in a way that resonate with readers? How can we create a more vivid story to grab and engage your audience?
By answering these questions, we'll develop our plan for improving your book.
Once we agree on an approach, I will guide you in rewriting the book according to my manuscript evaluation and your direction. I will give you detailed comments on the revised chapters on a regular basis. Working chapter by chapter, I’ll help you craft a book that says what you want to say, in the most powerful way possible.
My work doesn't end with the developmental edit. As part of my service I will advise you on the interior and exterior design of your book, write the jacket copy, and give you advice on publication.
More Praise for Al
“Al is the best. I tried working with four different developmental editors before him. They did only minor edits and rewrites. Al, on the other hand, took my material and questioned all of it. He told me honestly what wasn’t working and how to change it. The hard part is finding someone who can critique your work when they know you're in love with it. Two years later, rereading my book, I am 100% happy with it. This would certainly not be the case without Al’s work on it.”
Author, She's Six Steps Away
“Al Desetta has a talent for going to the heart of a writer's story.”
Persea Books, New York
“Al is a good listener and a very skillful at helping writers translate their ideas into the words that best express them.”
Founder, Youth Communication
MacArthur "Genius Award" Winner
How I Work with You
Developmental editors help authors solve story problems. Here's how.
An Organizing Principle. Your book must have an overriding organization. To use an analogy from a writing teacher I studied with at Columbia University, not having an organization is like rowing a boat on the ocean. You lose sight of land and you keep rowing, hoping to sight land on the other side. Soon you realize you’re lost and more rowing (more writing) won’t get you back to shore. You need a direction, a map to get you there, and I'll supply that map.
A Compelling Story Arc. Where does your book begin? How does the story unfold? In what order is information presented? How do we grab the reader’s attention from the start? How do we keep that attention throughout the book? Where and how will the book end? These are all essential questions I will help you answer.
The Big Picture. You have a lot of source material about your specialty or career, so much, in fact, it's easy to focus on minutia and lose sight of the big picture. I’ll help you stay focused on the big picture so you don’t get lost in unnecessary detail.
The Right Details. Events or ideas that will resonate deeply with readers may be given too little attention, while less important material is given too much. I’ll help you identify “the diamond in the rough” in your book—the strongest parts of your material and the true heart of your story that needs to be expressed.
What You Leave Out is as Important as What You Include. A self-help book can't be about every problem someone faces in life. A business book can't be about your entire career. A successful book has to focus on key aspects of your expertise, the distilled essence of what you want to say to readers, or what one of my writing teachers called “a heightened, partial truth," the kind of truth that will linger with readers.
Issues of Fairness and Proportion. In a memoir, some material that is particularly personal or painful for you or the people you’re writing about can be dealt with indirectly or not included at all.
When to Show and When to Tell. When to dramatize events using the techniques of fiction writing, such as scenes, dialogue, and description, and when to summarize them by writing in a more analytical and reflective way. This applies to almost every kind of genre.
Writing is Rewriting. A developmental editor helps authors rewrite and deepen their books. The first draft is just a start. In a memoir, for example, revision often means strengthening the book’s emotional and psychological insight. I will guide you through a revision process that will make your book far better than you first imagined it could be.
For a comprehensive developmental edit of your book, I charge a simple flat rate of $17,500, paid in four equal installments over the four-month course of the project.
Please contact me today and let's talk. Tell me a little about your book and the kind of editing help you're looking for.